On Sat, 19 Jan 2013 15:31:03 -0800 (PST), Marcus Melkersson
Post by Marcus MelkerssonSPOILER SPACE
Many things wither with time... both usenet technology and stories longer than a few books. RJ managed to keep an astonishing quality up for 6 books. Then we had politics, sniffing and meddling for 4 books. The big choedan kal event... a brief time of pure joy and then just the darkness when he left us. I know I was devastated. Actually the SF/F book store where I bought the 6 or so first of the books foretold that RJ would die before finishing the books. I remember feeling the dread... which came true about 15 years later. The bad joke which turned out not to be a joke.
Doesn't anybody care about line lengths anymore? Wow.
But anyway yeah, I concur.
Post by Marcus MelkerssonAnd all the good times visiting this group in the ninetees, reading & sharing what other thought about the books actually made them so much better. The book releases were such times to look forward to. Good times...memories of light just now. They will not soon be forgotten!
Indeed, indeed. Hah, good times.
*snicker*
Post by Marcus MelkerssonThen Brandon saved the day. Or the years to come even. He did a great job I think. Not perfect, but RJ somehow was getting lost in his own story. Or that's what I felt anyway. Too many plots and too lengthy descriptions.
Again, agreed.
Post by Marcus MelkerssonI thoroughly enjoyed all three of Brandon's books. However I understand your feelings. I felt them too. Just not to the extent I think you did. Brandon writing style is a bit hasty. Which may to some extent be due to his promise to close the story without dragging things out even one uneccessary step.
AMOL left me both hollow and satisfied. Satisfied that it was finally over. Hollow that it's over and there is nothing more.
I enjoyed the ending, and think it was fitting. I was however missing a few pieces that I would have guessed RJ would have put in. Something small from an age to come (the way the books started), and a longer prophecy than what was given. And maybe something from the 3 girls perspective at the very end.
Disatisfied thoughts about Tarmon Gaidon
1. I like battles but even I thought it a bit too long, and surprisingly hastily described. The interesting events should have been spent more time on, and the back and forth manouvers should have been more brief.
2. The 2 foolish I am a hero Demandred duels prequeling the one with Lan (also a bit foolish). The final one made me feel something though.
3. The description of the OP beeing woven felt empty. Nothing new, not exciting.
I agree, though none of these really jumped out at me at the time.
Post by Marcus MelkerssonHighlíghts
1. Rand's meeting with Mat and Fortuona
Brilliant. Never thought of the prior claim Rand would have had.
Would have liked to see Hawkwing talking with Tuon as well. She was
still way too sure of her misconceptions at the end.
Post by Marcus Melkersson2. Egwene's death - saviour scene
*nod*
Post by Marcus Melkersson3. Lans fight with Demandred
Like you say, I think this was just one too many. Could have been
fixed by at least one other Forsaken doing something horrible instead.
Mind you, Demandred had an excuse for coming out of nowhere and being
awesome. He'd been working up to it forever. The rest, if they
suddenly stopped sucking, you'd have to wonder why they waited so
long.
Post by Marcus Melkersson4. Perrins fighting plots
Too drawn-out, and he had too many comebacks.
Post by Marcus Melkersson5. Rands fight with the DO - I "always" thought he wound reimprison the DO again (not kill him), either by removing the patch, mending the pattern and undoing the hole to the DO or by trapping him into callandor. I like the "tests" that the DO and Rand gives each other - we should have seen something like that coming up given RJ:s fancy recycling the bible.
Agreed, I liked the tests. Callandor just barely escaped being too
convenient, some of that stuff about it forcing a channeler into a
subservient link (and channeling the True Power) was a bit sudden but
the way they used the flaws, and the way they fixed up Lews Therin's
mistake by using saidar as well, that was good. I guess I knew they
were going to do it that way, but I did like the way it seemed
*possible* Rand could kill the Dark One, and I liked the way he was
made to realise it would destroy humanity just as surely as the Dark
One winning.
Protecting the True Source from tainting by using the Dark One's own
power really only makes sense the less you think about it, though. Why
couldn't he strike through his own power and taint saidar and saidin?
I guess Rand was making a shield of some sort out of True Power
weaves.
Post by Marcus Melkersson6. The forsaken finally beeing real badasses
A couple of them, anyway.
Post by Marcus Melkersson7. That people we like/love actually started dying
Yes. A bit abrupt, but a long time coming.
Yes!
*snicker*
Post by Marcus Melkersson10. Lan's initial scene
11. Lan facing 2 Myrrdraal
12. Moghediens fate
13. The peace treaty scene
*nod nod nod nod*
Loved it. It would have really sucked to have them sit it out
entirely, and this explained Demandred right down to the ground. In
your face, Taimandretards.
And it didn't seem like a last-minute retcon or addition at all. Every
Dominion War needs a Breen.
Post by Marcus Melkersson15. The surfacing of the Aiel's who's supposedly spit in the eye's of the sightblinder (I always wondered then they would turn up)
Yeah, that was a rather cool bit at the end of one of the previous
Sanderson books, very nice.
Post by Marcus Melkersson16. Olver blowing the horn - even though that eventually became pretty obvious
*nod*
Was caught off-guard about Mat being disconnected from the Horn, and
had forgotten his death fromthe Darkhound completely.
Post by Marcus Melkersson17. Birgittes death, Elayne's near death and Birgittes rescue
Have to admit I was surprised.
Post by Marcus MelkerssonMore unfulfilling thought's / questions
1. The numbers, where did all the Randland channelers disappear. The numbers do not add up!
I thought there were way more of them out there to get killed than
there should have been. Funny. I thought there were only a couple of
thousand, all told.
Post by Marcus Melkersson2. The immense numbers of trollocs, how where they fed and breeded?
Yeah, a bit funny, could have been explained a bit more. Huge creepy
Blightfarms?
Post by Marcus Melkersson3. The lack of "new" shadowspawn, I always imagined the worms in the blight to be "morphed"
Yeah, some of the fleeting glimpses were fun, in Rand's visions and
Faile's detour, but all in all, the series needed more Blight.
Post by Marcus Melkersson4. The lack of description of where Demandred's new sa'angreal (Sarkanen?) came from.
*nod* Although the fact that he was in Shara the entire time, becoming
their God-King, explains it. A nation that powerful and mysterious is
allowed to have *one* artifact. And the Dark One himself deemed
Demandred to have done well.
I was expecting a weird twist of fate with that sa'angreal, with some
main character trying to use it on him (after Taim's death) and
getting toasted. Oh well.
Post by Marcus Melkersson5. How Rand came to "resurrect" - I alway's imagined that Nynaeve
somehow would do it.
Ugh, no please.
Post by Marcus MelkerssonSnatching his soul 3 days gone - biblic reference again - ever since the
foreshadowing: "She wouldn't be satisfied until she healed someone 3
days dead". Somehow I thought it fitting that he ended up in Moridin's
body - given the strange interconnection the always had. However I
had imagined that he would end up on a boat funeral pyre a'la
Arthur Pendraegon.
Not sure if I am satisfied or cheated by Rand's body-swap, myself.
Have to think about it.
Post by Marcus Melkersson6. The long wait of the Seanchan to rejoin the battle. That seemed too late.
Nah, perfect timing!
Post by Marcus Melkersson7. Where were all the Seanchan grolms, torms, lopars in the beginning
of the fight? They just joined the final assault. Why?
A good point.
Post by Marcus Melkersson8. Why didn't the shadow strike the supply chain of the Light and their healing centre.
Yeah, the "outrageous" attack on the refugees that Logain settled,
that was one of the only ones. They should have been all over that
shit.
I guess they didn't want to divide their forces any further. But a
couple of raids could have been done, surely.
Post by Marcus Melkersson9. Why didn't the light try any traps of their own? Like the one Taim set for Rand?
*nod*
Post by Marcus Melkersson10. Why didn't the light hit the dark's supply chain?
*nod*
Wait, what supply chain? Blightfarms!
I guess the Trollocs were making their own supply chains as they
killed and died, that was mentioned a time or two. Hungry Hungry
Trollocs.
Post by Marcus Melkersson11. What happened with the all the steel failing initial theme? - My thoughts were - shit the dragons are screwed.
Enh, that was just a bubble. Nobody could control that stuff.
Post by Marcus Melkersson12. I would have expected at least one more gholam attack on the forces of the light's channelers
Were there any more gholam though?
Post by Marcus Melkersson13. Logain's internal fight - it was a good idea/theme but poorly written
Yeah, I guess his glory was still on the horizon.
Post by Marcus MelkerssonBah... ending with critique... that is totally unfair. It was a good book, actually one of the better! And I am forever thankful that you finished the series Brandon!
Anyhow... thanks to all the fans here for sharing during all the years. It's been a lovely acquaintance!
I concur.
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